Feedback from Crit:
- Overall execution of the design could have been carried out better.
- Placement of the design on the inside of the leaflet was slightly off and this needs to be addressed.
- Colour of card perhaps too dark.
- The red colour was perceived to be brown.
For this design I have increased the opacity of the red from 33% to 75% so it is more bold. I have chosen a lighter grey colour. Previously I printed on grey card but if I were to print again, I'd probably print grey ink onto white stock.
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