- How could I make the photograph of the product better on the poster look better? (It looks a bit randomly placed).
- Do you think my choice of colour works well?
- Is the 'Clown Face' text on the poster too bold?
- What do you think of the layout of my flyer?
- Do the business cards have enough information on to communicate what I'm trying to sell?
Strengths:
- Good choice of font as gives the appearance of carnival and clowns.
- Unusual Shape of flyer works well with topic and adds interest, very relevant.
- Simple illustrations are clear and good when instructing what the user needs to do.
- Colour Scheme works well
- Interesting leaflet format - clear
- Typeface works well fitting with the circus theme
- Business card clear with information
Areas for Improvement:
- More recognisable clown colours could be used which would be brighter and more interest to children, perhaps too many dull pastel colours used for topic
- Simplify and keep the font choice of other texts consistent
- Make sure the title is clearly displayed on the front of the business card to make it clear of the subject
- Make sure layout is central and equal spaced on the page
Considerations:
- Could possibly frame the image of product with the circular shapes and dots
- Photo of the product could have more impact if scale increased
- Possibly add more info about which retailers the product could be sold in
- Look at making the clown hat wider as it could be easily torn
- Include other imagery related to clowns to make topic clear
- Leaflet type
- Poster size - bigger?
- Info on leaflet
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