Wednesday 3 October 2012

Promotional Graphics Feedback

Questions I would like answered:


  • How could I make the photograph of the product better on the poster look better? (It looks a bit randomly placed).
  • Do you think my choice of colour works well?
  • Is the 'Clown Face' text on the poster too bold?
  • What do you think of the layout of my flyer?
  • Do the business cards have enough information on to communicate what I'm trying to sell?


Strengths:


  • Good choice of font as gives the appearance of carnival and clowns.
  • Unusual Shape of flyer works well with topic and adds interest, very relevant.
  • Simple illustrations are clear and good when instructing what the user needs to do.
  • Colour Scheme works well
  • Interesting leaflet format - clear
  • Typeface works well fitting with the circus theme
  • Business card clear with information
Areas for Improvement:

  • More recognisable clown colours could be used which would be brighter and more interest to children, perhaps too many dull pastel colours used for topic
  • Simplify and keep the font choice of other texts consistent
  • Make sure the title is clearly displayed on the front of the business card to make it clear of the subject
  • Make sure layout is central and equal spaced on the page
Considerations:

  • Could possibly frame the image of product with the circular shapes and dots
  • Photo of the product could have more impact if scale increased
  • Possibly add more info about which retailers the product could be sold in 
  • Look at making the clown hat wider as it could be easily torn
  • Include other imagery related to clowns to make topic clear
  • Leaflet type
  • Poster size - bigger?
  • Info on leaflet

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